Thoughts?

netripe · 4 months

Thanks for all the comments people, they honestly help a great deal and will all be kept in mind for future work!

netripe · 4 months

The target audience is people in the local area of the shop this flyer was designed for, residents who may be looking for the services they provide. I'm just looking for ways I can improve my work in the future, and any critique would be helpful, thank you.

netripe · 4 months

I think both her parents were lurchers, but there is definitely a lot of greyhound in there somewhere (her looks and her love of hunting).

tedbrookes · 5 months

They're fucking minerals Marie!

IleNosirrah · 6 months

I used to play Minecraft on my old PC, and it worked fine, then I bought a Mac Book Pro, and I'm unable to walk more than 100 meters without it crashing. I see Notch using his Mac Book Air to play it all the time, what am I doing wrong? Single player by the way.

netripe · 6 months

One of these will stop it happening again, I love them!

kwehkweh · 7 months

Indeed

huss_am · 7 months

This how we do it in the east end :D

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Q-a69_Hm3gI

netripe · 9 months

OK. Do you mean the text I've written? Do you think it should be more personal, or its unnecessary? Sorry, just trying to make sure its all perfect, cheers.

netripe · 9 months

Good point, I'll get rid of the swearing, the links are broken anyway, cheers.

netripe · 9 months

Thank you! What do you mean by tripe? I'm a little confused, I thought it was a food, haha

netripe · 9 months

Thank you, yes I can see what you mean now I look at it that way, I will have to look into having a static header or rearranging the site into to separate pages so nobody else gets this problems. Cheers!

netripe · 9 months

I chose the domain name for its shortness, and vague relevancy to the word "internet" and "new/modern". My initial idea was to have some kind of fruit in the logo along with a reference to web design somehow, but it ended up feeling to cliche, or I just couldn't make it work. The bird idea comes from a nickname given to me by friends (pigeon), and seemed to fit in well with the tree I initially drew, that was going to have fruit hanging from it, which switched to @ symbols as some kind of reference to the word "Net" in the website name. I think it can be improved, maybe I need to make it clearer as to what the website/web domain stands for in someway, I'll have to think about it! Thanks for pointing it out :)

netripe

TROPHY CASE

you'll need to login or register to do that

create a new account

login