The first ones kinda neat, the way the light is outlining the figures and all. The main problem is that I have no idea what I'm supposed to be looking at. I mean, obviously whatever is in the picture, but what about it? Photographers rely on light, color, etc to provide visuand cues and direct the eye. here is an example. The pose is pretty intentional, it circles your eye around. Even the shoulder from the mannequin is pointing upwards and keeps the movement going. Since that's more formal, here's another example of how you can still achieve this when you're out shooting "in the wild" so to speak: here. The stairs guide your eye down exactly where the photographer wants it to be.

Anyway, my point is that the problem is that it's not clear WHY you took the picture, or what we should be looking at. Ask yourself: what about these people or scenarios interested you, and how can you make that clearer without having to explain it?

Sorry if that's rambly and doesn't help, I'm half asleep and not helpful. If you want, I can elaborate or maybe explain more clearly in the morning.

Edit: cues, not clues