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[–]ZugTheMegasaurus 24 points25 points ago

I can't read this without placing it in my grandparents' house (which was scary enough before my grandfather died in it). So freaked out...good story!

[–]ODSTSpooky 6 points7 points ago

Oh god me too... especially since I was there when mine passed and while it wasn't scary at the time it's... devestating to think about >.<

[–]kruddypants 4 points5 points ago

Me to!

[–]JakeBloom 0 points1 point ago

Hmm, I sort of made up my own house in my mind- Not much detail, just simple images of inside the house that quickly came to my mind while reading.

[–]Mister_Famine[S] 34 points35 points ago

Wow, thank you everyone for the positive feedback! This is my first post to /nosleep, and I'm glad you all enjoyed it.

[–]ZoMgPwNaGe 1 point2 points ago

We enjoyed it, you earned it. Great story.

[–]pibegardel 41 points42 points ago

Creepy and well-written.

[–]aidan878 4 points5 points ago

I saw you're grandma as my ma (what we called my grandma) and you're grandpa as my papa (what we called my grandpa) and when you're grandma explained you're grandpa as face peeling and skin and bones, i just shuttered.

[–]CreamyPotato 3 points4 points ago

When i read stories and put the images of what is happening in my head my brain ALWAYS processes the scenario in familiar settings with familiar looking people (Unless of course a description of what the people look like is given) and i would have to say whenever you read stories like that, The fear and sadness hit you 10 times harder

[–]MattyD123 10 points11 points ago

That was awesome! I'm new here, so I don't know if everything written is true or were supposed to just take it as fact, but anyways, could you get a copy of the diary?

[–]pibegardel 16 points17 points ago

The most important rule of NoSleep:

Everything you read in r/nosleep is true; please suspend your disbelief while you are here.

[–]docmedic 16 points17 points ago

It's true in some universe. Whether or not it's this one is a different story.

[–]MattyD123 1 point2 points ago

I like that answer :)

[–]Blooga245 7 points8 points ago

This was a good story, and very creepy, and I don't want to be a nay-sayer, but if you're going to write a story as a dialogue, try to keep the storyteller at the focus. The interjections took away a lot of the buildup and overall effectiveness of your writing. Well, that's what I felt. But on the whole, a very good story. Look forward to reading more.

[–]ermintwang 1 point2 points ago

Agreed, the interjections didn't add anything, they spoilt the momentum a bit. I actually click on the comments to see if anyone else agreed. Didn't expect the ending though, really creepy.

[–]kellypryde 3 points4 points ago

I saw him, on the floor, he was on his belly, pulling himself around the corner towards my room.

Excellent climax and delivery. I just about peed myself.

[–][deleted] 2 points3 points ago

Fantastic writing skills, you captured the grandma's disheveled state perfectly.

[–]KillaPeas 2 points3 points ago

Why sell a horrible fear murder house. Should have burned the fucker.

[–]aRandomRedditUser 2 points3 points ago

Great post. Sorry for your loses, but regardless this is a very well written post.

[–]K4ylan 2 points3 points ago

My Grandfather had a heart attack in his garden too; which ended up killing him. 0.0 I'm glad he didn't come back to kill my grandmother.

[–]x5m 1 point2 points ago

That was spooky as hell. Well done!

[–]l337haxs 1 point2 points ago

Gave me goosebumps!

[–]Deadlysin 1 point2 points ago

This is a great story!

[–]coe4514 1 point2 points ago

That was actually pretty creepy.

[–]Bibidiboo 1 point2 points ago

I totally pictured it in my mind, creepy as hell!

[–]chaosallstar 1 point2 points ago

Brilliant! Well done.

[–]kendrahwithanh 1 point2 points ago

i would watch a movie of this. I'm actually a little freaked out now thinking about it. good story!!!

[–]jigga19 1 point2 points ago

Holy Shit....this is the best one I've read in a LONG time. I can't remember the last time I found something this eerie on here. Very well done!

[–]BlinkyGirl 1 point2 points ago

I call demons! I call demons! scared

[–]Scoozie 1 point2 points ago

This scared me and, at the same time, made me incredibly sad. Very well-written.

[–]xeridoo 1 point2 points ago

Goodbye sleep! Hello hellish nightmares! Despite the fact I was stupid for reading this at 2:00am, I still think it was pretty darn good.... u should become a horror writer!!!!

[–]amnwaggles 1 point2 points ago

This story was very creepy, but at the same time very sad. I couldn't help feeling sympathetic at seeing dead loved ones.

[–]Moatilliatta 1 point2 points ago

Awesome story! Definitely gave me the creeps :D

[–]thewrathofmary 1 point2 points ago

I searched through my "liked" links for about an hour just to find this and read over it again. This STILL creeps me out - whether fiction or true story. I tell my friends this story all they time and almost every one of them get chills. Everytime.

Brilliant. Simply brilliant. Scared the hell out of me, which says a lot.

[–]Mister_Famine[S] 0 points1 point ago

Thank you very much, I really appreciate that. I have one or two more experiences I hope to post soon. Thank you for reading!

[–]thewrathofmary 0 points1 point ago

Oh pleeeaaase post more. If they are half as creepy as this one I'll probably peel my own face off. But who needs a face anyway. :D

And thank yourself for posting such a terrifying experience! The way you worded it and described everything amplified the scary effect also.

[–]wandabee 2 points3 points ago

<shudder> That's just GHASTLY. A very well crafted tale!

[–]johnstalvern1122 0 points1 point ago

Not long enough, read the whole thing! That was really great!

[–]thewrathofmary 0 points1 point ago

This was absolutely PHENOMENAL - fake or real, this was ridiculously creepy. Thanks for sharing!

[–]control-z 0 points1 point ago

I imagined this happening in my grandpa's old house. NOPE.

[–]DrFunkdubious 1 point2 points ago

That was pretty good. I like the ending. Maybe you should take out some of the unnecessary dialogue, just a suggestion.

[–]BuildItFilmItA -4 points-3 points ago

L.